What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-18
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage
It is known that it is not easy to overcome difficulties.But,in my opinion,it is important for us to have courage.It is required by us.
In our daily lives,there are lots of difficulties.However,we are not able to avoid them.Because the farther you keep away from ,the larger the difficulties are.We must face them with courage.
Therefore,being a teenager studing in modern society.I hold on my opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
万能句型用的倒是不错，就是几乎都用在议论上了
你要注意，如果中考需要记叙文，尤其是给你了提示“让你结合自己的亲身经历”你要多写些具体的生活中的事件，这样不会显得作文太空。
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what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 赵薇 2015-06-17
what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 赵薇
Everyday in our dailylives, we have many difficults .We must need courage to overcoming difficulties and get succeed.
One day ,our school had an exam.I forgot to reviewed the lesson so I failed the text. I was very sad.At that time,my English teacher came along and sad: Comparing play computer games with reviewing the lesson ,you prefer to play computer games.So,you can't pass the exam.Since then ,not only I study English in the class very hard ,but also I review the lesson everyday. Finally,I make a success in the next exam.
Being a teenager studying in modern socrety,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage. Do you agree with me? 赵薇
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：17分
“daily lives” 改成“daily life”
“We must need courage to overcoming…” 改成“We must need …to overcome”
“forgot to reviewed” 改成“forgot to review”
“not only I study…” 改成“not only do I study…”
最后改成“Don’t you agree with me?”
建议你多看看我们上课讲的笔记，现在已经可以下载了，然后再仔细点！
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 2015-06-17
There are many difficulties in our lives, some of them are hard to overcome. Being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that confidence can help us overcome difficulties because it makes us believe in ourselves.
Once I failed in an important exam, I was so sad that I almost lost heart to study well. At that time, my teacher advised me that I should believe in myself and build up confident. Her encouragement raised my spirits. I realized that what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence. From then on, the more I studied harder , the more I felt stronger confident. And soon ,I succeeded in the final exam.
In a word, comparing with the other things, confidence is my preference. Because it not only can we cheer ourselves up, but also we can succeed in doing everything. Remember, what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19分
不错！能把我们教的万能句型和自己的句子结合起来
最重要的是你结合了自己的真实经历，记叙和议论的比例控制的很好！
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指点中考英语作文 2015-06-17
It is useful to help others
Everyone need help when he gets into trouble. So, Being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that it is useful to help others.
One day, I saw an old woman walking slowly with two bags of heavy rice on her back. I ran to help her in hurry. I was very surprised why she bought so much rice. She smiled and told me she bought it for wild birds. With my help she could get home fast. She said thanks to me once more and I was very happy.
We can do something for others and it is useful for them. Do not you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：17分
“Eveyone need help .” 这句话的need改成needs
So，后面的Being应该是小写
有一点不足：最后一段的语义衔接上不是很紧密
记住，中考的批分原则中除了语法词汇还有就是“连贯”
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking 2015-06-17
Being a poor teenager in modern society , i hold an opinion that if we want live in this society , we should hardworking.
It can be said with certainly that modern society is a competition society ,in this respect we may as say no ability will starve to death .There is no denying the fact that we must hardworking for the future. Not everyone will be famous, famous people are hard work.
Therefore, we have the reason to believe that anyone who want to gain something they must try his best to go for it. as long as you try your best , you can gain the things you want.
Don’t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：17分
“if we want live” 这句话want和live之间少了一个to
should hardworking之间少了一个be
should是情态动词，应该接动词原形，hardworking是形容词，所以可以用be连接
收尾应用上了我们讲过的万能句型，不错！
但是，中考题目如果是让你记叙自己的亲身经历，就要多写些真实的故事
你的文章记叙部分少，都是说理，这就显得会有点空。
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李子航的作文what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 2015-06-17
What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence
We will face many difficulties in our daily life .And we need confidence to overcome it. Compared with having belief to overcome difficulties,confidence is my preference.
Once,I failded in an exam,but I did not lose my heart.I got more confidence form my mnm's encourage to overcome difficultie of the failture,so that I got a good marks in the next exam.
Not only can we need belief to overcome difficulties,but also we need confidence to do it.Being a teenager studying in morden society.I hoid an opinion that we need confidence to overcome difficulties,because having confidence is the important part of overcoming difficulties.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
Not only后面的can we是可以调整的，可以用can I，而且but also前是逗号
其他的还可以！
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what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 2015-06-17
How time flies! Next week we will graduate from junior high school . I'm eager to face the life of the senior high school . Now,we must pass an important exam_Zhong Kao. This is the first turning in our lives. It's important for everyone. Many students may have some difficulties. First,we must believe that we are the best. Not to worry about the grades.Everything is OK!
Therefore,we should be confident. With confidence,we can overcome the difficulties. Because of confidence the difficulties will change into the hope to light our sky.
Being a teenager studying in modern society,I believe confidence is the best way in overcoming difficulties.
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
文章流畅，就是.......
有点跑题，题目要求结合自己真实经历写一篇文章，
你这没有经历，就是感悟，而且是毕业前的感悟，和克服困难需要自信相差的有点远呀！
亲! 再改改，我怎么觉得你的文法能写出来满分的作文呢！
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123456 what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-17
being ateenager studying in onordern society.i hond on opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.as the saying goes ,where there is a will ,there is a way .i remembered that i failed to an exam at the age of thirteen .but my father only told me to put my heart into it and full of courage .why? since courage not only can we comeover difficulties.but also we can learn charming things from trying again and again .therefore i did that and made it .i know god helps those who help themselves .so we need courage to help us s lve difficulties .donot you agree with me ?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：17分
“comever” 改成“overcome”
其他的应该是家长打字出现的拼写错误
还是大多数的同学的作文的问题，没有太多的真实经历记叙，更多的都是议论和感悟
要注意控制记叙和议论的比例
中考时，如果题目说“结合真实经历”就要多写点记叙的篇幅。
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中考押题班作文：Reading Comic Strip Is Iteresting 2015-06-17
Reading Comic Strip Is Iteresting
I thing reading Comic Strip is interesting.
Though the novel become more and more popular,the Comic Strip still well.Comic Strip can bring me happiness.So I like read Comic Strip best.
Compared with nodela or oother books,reading Comic Strip is my perference.
Why?
Because there are two main reasons,The first is Comic Strip can take me happiness and make me relax in a busy day.Not only can I feel relax but also can I know something in the place.For example the Comic Strip in China always tell us a story long times ago.
Beeing a teenger student in morden society ,I I hold an opinion that it is interesting to read Comic Strip.
Why don"t you have a try?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
“morden” 这个单词应该不是家长打字的问题，改成：modern
其他的拼写错误应该是家长的打字的问题，我就忽略了。
虽然用上了万能句型不多，但是还可以，不错！
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新世纪中考作文 2015-06-17
What we need in overcoming difficulties is patience .
Nothing can hide the fact that a patient mind plays an important part in our daily lives.
Being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that we should be patient with others.
When I was nine, I had a bad temper. I was not able to get along well with others. I always felt lonely. Once, my teacher talked with me and tried to let me know how important it is to be patient with others. Compared with loneliness, becoming optimistic and having lots of friends is my preference. From then on, I become patient and was out of trouble.
Isn，t it essential to be patient?
金子祺 126中学 初3.5班
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19分
“Compared … is my preference .” 这句话逗号后半部分是and连接的两个主语，所以is改成are
其他的都写得很流畅自然，而且记叙和议论的比例控制的很好。
不错! 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
市实验 9.15 高钫婷 2015-06-17
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
There are many difficulties in our daily. In my idea, courage is important.
Once upon a time. I was tired of studying compared with doing homework, playing computer games was my preference. Since I failed an exam. I had no courage to face my parents. However, my mother said to me:” If you have courage again, everything is ok.” Since then, because of mother’s encourage. Not only could I have much courage to study well, but also I could live happily everyday.
Being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
Don’t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
你的作文中有记叙，但是仓促的结束了，故事的完整性体现不出来，而且你知道吗？故事不完整就很难和下面你的议论结合起来，所以可以自己写完反复读几遍作文，从而在语境上把握好！
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新世纪学员 郭美松的英语作文 what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 请老师帮忙改一改 谢谢 2015-06-17
In our daily lives,we have to face many difficulties Being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opionion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
Once there was an exam and I had a bad score,I was so sad that I wanted to give up ,Then,my mum told me I should face the difficulties confidently,In this way ,I could study better, I tried to study just as what my mother told me ,Then I became more and more confident and my mother was very happpy too.Not only can confidence make us study well,but also it can bring happiness to our lives .
All in all,compared with avoiding difficulties,facing difficulties confidently is my preferance ,I deem what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence .Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19分
“Not only…” 这句话少了主语，应该改成Not only should I have confidence ….
其他的万能句型用的还不错！
再加油! 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
Hu's homework 2015-06-16
What we need in overcoming difficulties is patience
I got a "C" in an exam! This made me very disappionted.Even l wanted to not to study any more.I sat down near the window. By accident,I saw a spider at a corner.he was making a spider web.Though the wind blew strongly ,the web was damaged,the spider didn't give up.He went on making his web……
I realized something.Being a teenager studying in modern society.I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is patience! I began to work hard and finally made progress.Thanks,the spider,you taught me an important lesson.
Therefore,patience is the most important thing,do you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
“Even I wanted to not to study any more” 这句话应该改为“Even I didn’t want to study anymore”
我想说一点的是，中考时都希望学生结合自己的亲身经历
蜘蛛的故事有点.....
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作业 What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-16
When we grow up,we must solve many problems and the courage is the most important.
Once,I meta problem.I tried my best but failed.I wanted to give up.I needed courage.Comparing with giving up,solvingit with hard work was my preference.So,finally,I succeeded in solving it.
Being a teenager in modern society,Ihold an opinion that courage is always the most important thing what we need in overcoming difficulties.Not only can it encourage us,but also canhelp us solve the problems.
So,what needed in overcoming difficulties is courage.
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
“Comparing with…” 这句话应该改为“Compared with giving up, solving it …”
主句话在上课的时候我们讲过，可以下载笔记对照看看！
but also 后面少了一个主语，应该是it can。
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking(LWT) 2015-06-16
What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking(LWT)
Hardworking is so good that it has helped me overcome difficulties many times.
Once, there would be a difficult text about History. We had to learn many things by heart. However , Compared with History .English is my preference .Therefore , I must work hard to remember .History events .Finally, I made it Not only can we remember or learn something hard in studying . but also we can learn everything in lives hard .Being a teenager studying in modern Society. I hold an opnion that what we need in over coming difficulties is hard working .
Don’t you agree with me ?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
“Compared with History .English is my preference .” 这句话是万能句型，但是用的不是很贴切，你发现在语义上和上下文不是很连贯了吗？
如果结合语境，改成：Compared with giving up, hardworking is my preference then. 更好!
Not only后面的can we是可以调整的，可以用can I，而且but also前是逗号
其他的还可以，再仔细点吧！
Anyway! 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！