What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 2015-06-15
Everyday,we face plenty of difficulties in our studies and lives.Being a teenager studying in local society, I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.It is the first step of success.
Do you want to know why?
Compared with fear,confidence is my preference.When we face difficulties, if we feel scared, we will fail.Not only can confidence give us power to fight against them,but also it can make our brains more flexible.
So ,isn’t it important for us to have confidence in evercoming difficulties?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：17分
写的句子都是不错的，就是一个问题，没有记叙的实际内容
要结合自己身上发生的客服困难的事件去写，要是能用上万能句型写记叙就更好了！
加油！李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-15
Being a person who had a successful experience,I hold an opinion that we need courage when we are facing difficulties because it can give us confidence to solve the problem.
It's eight years since I have learnt to cycle.When I sat on my bike for the first time,I fell down.I was hurt badly,and I felt very terrible.I cried and decided not to learn it any more.However,I still hoped I could cycle myself when I saw some children riding their beautiful bikes.So I had a rest,then I sat on it again.Though I may fall down again,I did't care it.And now,I can ride my favourite bike along the river fast.
To sum up,from the bottom of my heart,compared with giving up,plucking up the courage is my preference.I will never give up in the future.(请问可以写超过100字吗）
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李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19分
Being a person who had a successful experience,I hold an opinion that we need courage when we are facing difficulties because it can give us confidence to solve the problem.
这句话改写的很漂亮，你能把这个万能句型的句式为己所用，这是很好的。
文章的记叙比例合适，议论的比例也恰到好处，不错！
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming is confidence 2015-06-15
What we need in overcoming is confidence
In our daily lives,there must be many difficulties,and we want to overcome these difficulties. But how can we do to overcome these difficulties?
Being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming is confidence.
At first,when I learnt to swim,I didn't have a great success,but I was confident,I bielived that I can do it well.At last,I did it.
Not only can confidence help us overcome difficulties,but also it can make our lives better.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：17分
“But how can we do to overcome these difficulties?”
改为“But what can we do to …?”
万能句型用的倒是不错
就是记叙的实际内容太少了，有点空
试着结合自己亲身经历的话语要尽量多些，把万能句型结合亲身经历的记叙来写，这样既用上那个了万能句型，也符合文章的要求了。
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is patience 2015-06-15
It's known that "A watched pot never boils".Being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that we should be more patient when difficulties come.
In my final exam last year.I met a question so difficult that I had no idea to work it out.God!I've never asked a more difficult question before it.What should I do?
Then I told myself"Calm down,man!You'll make it!Come on!" .Finally,I worked it out successfully and got a high score.
See?It's important to keep patient in solving problems.Thanks to my patience.SO,my friend,if you meet some difficulties,the only thing you need is patience!
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
“I’ve never asked a more difficult question before it.What should I do?”
此句改成I’ve never met such a difficult question before..
整体写的流畅，不错！
see？
你没有太多的用上我们讲的万能句型。
尽量再多用些，例如最后：Don’t you agree with me?之类的
茫茫试卷中，不用担心你和别人重复。
What we need in overcoming difficults is confidence 2015-06-15
In our life,we always have difficults in doing something.Someone manages to do it,but others choose to give up
it.Confidence is important for us when we are in difficults.Compared with courage,confidence is my preference.
The reasons are following:
First,we may suffer from stress as we face difficulties,confidence can make stress be energy.Second,not only
can we become brave with confidence,but also we can have a positive thinking of the future.
Therefore,being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that we need confidence in overcoming
difficulties.
Don't you agree with me？
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
哈哈！发现什么问题了吗？
如果是说明议论文，你能得满分，可是如果是记叙文你就要结合自己亲身的经历来写出记叙的句子
所以，你要调整一下，但是从你的行文能力，老师能看出来你有不错的英文文法功底
试着结合自己亲身经历的话语要尽量多些，把万能句型结合亲身经历的记叙来写，这样既用上那个了万能句型，也符合文章的要求了。李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 2015-06-15
Being a teenager studying in modern society , I have an opinion that the quality of person we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
Why?
Because first , when you are in trouble , you may be scared of difficulties and fail to out of trouble . But being confident will not like . Not only can we face to the difficulties , but also we can learn about the difficulties and finally beat it .
Compared with cowardice ,confidence is my preference bacause cowardice just can lead us to the abyss .
Don't you agree with me ?
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李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
not only can we face to 去掉to，face是及物动词，直接接the difficulties
其他的单词拼写错误估计是你家长打字的问题，不影响
别忘了！结合自己亲身经历的话语要尽量多些，把万能句型结合亲身经历的记叙来写，这样既用上那个了万能句型，也符合文章的要求了，而不是万能句型和记叙的内容分离。李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
加油！~ 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-15
Nowadays,there are many difficulties in our lives.And we shouldn't escape,but go and face them.
There are many spirits we have can help us to overcome these difficulties.Compared with patience,courage is my preference.Because courage is a charming spirit,being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
Courage not only can we overcome difficulties ,but also we can be a brave man.We can train our courage by encouraging ourselves over and over and exercising us to have more confidence.
Don't be afraid of defeat and difficulties.As long as we have enough courage,anything is possible.
It's valuable for us to have courage.It helps us overcome difficulties in the future.Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19分
能够很自然的把我们讲的万能句型和自己的话结合使用，不错！
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-15
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage
Without courage. We can`t do anything. In my idea courage helps us to overcome difficulties.
There are many difficulties in our daily lifes and we should to work it out. Compared with running out . Overcoming difficulties with courage is my preference when I was six years old. My teacher gave me some homework. That was very difficult. So I didn`t finish it. Not only have my teacher criticized me. But also I feel as hamed. After that I decided I should overcome difficulties with courage and I should keep pace with the time
Above all. Being a teenager studying in mordern society. I hold an opinion that we should overcome difficulties with courage.
Don`t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
“There are many difficulties in our daily lifes and we should to work it out. ”
改成：There are many difficulties in our daily lives and what we should do is to work it out.
“Compared with running out. Overcoming ….”
中间的句号必须改成逗号，而且overcoming改成小写
not only …but also 之间的句号也改成逗号，然后小写
其他的还可以，也用上了我们讲的万能句型了。
加油！~ 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
陈紫燕的英语作文 2015-06-15
What we need in overcoming difficulties is belief
There are many difficulties on the way to success . Such as courage, patiences,confidence. In my opinion,it’s important for over coming difficulties is belief.
On a windy day .I found a book called You are the best. It was wroten by orson .His artides keep pace with the times .Not only do.I like his careful words.Then I have a belief To be a writer like Orson.
What I was important the belief like a light in the dark and I wouldn’t give up.If I hadn’t read his book ,I would have been active .Being a teerager studying in modern society .I hold an opinion It’s important for overcoming difficulties.
Don’t you think so?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：17分
In my opinion,it’s important for over coming difficulties is belief. 改成：In my opinion, what is important in overcoming difficulties is belief.
最后一句也是这个问题改成：
Being a teenager studying in modern society .I hold an opinion what is important in overcoming difficulties is belief.
Don’t you think so?
另外，not only我看见了，可是but also没有了。
再仔细些呀！
加油！~ 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
what we need in overcoming difficulties is patient 2015-06-15
Being a teenager studying in modern society there are many difference for us, l hope an opinion that we should deal it with patient .
In our daily life,there are many kinds of differences around us.If we keep ourself peace and face to it with patient,not only can we feel relax but also we can solve the problems perfectly.lt was the reason why I deem we need overcoming difficulties in patient.
Let's keep our mind patient,everything will be easy.
老师这篇作文感觉词穷，尤其是到结尾，如果中考时遇到同样的问题什么办?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：16分
能看出来，是词穷，除了我上课讲的句型和单词，你几乎没有什么自己发挥的了，哈哈！
几个错误注意纠正：
deal it with patient, 改成patience；
face to it with patient 改成 face it with patience;
why I deem we need …改成why I deem what we need in overcoming difficulties is patience.
whatever!
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming is confidence 2015-06-15
Bing a teenager studying in the society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming is confidence.
Last year,I didn't prepar well before an important exam and therefore I was so unconfident that I failed to make those easy questions correctly.Though compared with keeping myself nervous unduly,holding myself still is my preference, I didn't control my mood well.
Not only can be confident help us do well in exams,but also it can be a good habit for solving important events. Aren't we need confidence to face the future?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
前半部分写的不错，可是从not only开始语境的衔接不是那么紧密
“not only can be confident”改成“not only can confidence”
“Aren’t we need …”改成“Don’t we need…”
加油！~ 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-14
We always meet some difficulties when we grow up.so we should find somethings to solve difficulties.
Being a teenager studying in modern society I hold an opinion that we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
To be honest,I have ever met many difficulties. But I can solve difficulties every times.Because I have many courage from my friends teachers and parents'encouragements.
Compared with other conditions, courage is my preference. Not only can we do many things better, but also we can know what we need when we meet difficulties.
Isn't it important to have courage.
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
你写的文章很顺，不错。
用到的万能句型也不错，但是，别忘了！结合自己亲身经历的话语要尽量多些，把万能句型结合亲身经历的记叙来写，这样既用上那个了万能句型，也符合文章的要求了，而不是万能句型和记叙的内容分离。李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
曹辰雨2333 2015-06-14
What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
Nowadays,we should face any kinds of difficulties.So,in my viewpoint,what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
No exaggeration to say，if we have enough confidence we can solve any problem.Compared with finding a lot complex ways,learning to have more confidence is my preference.
You know why?
Because building up confidence can really raise our spirits to face more and more problems.Once on the way to a mountain climbing,I was used up and can`t walk one more step.But at that moment I saw the scenery on the top of mountain,this gave me confidence to go on and finally arrive the top.
Therefore being a teenager in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficultes is confidence.Not only can we solve problems easily with it,but also it give me the power of life.
Don`t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19分
整体写的比较流畅，就是再注意些细节的问题
but also it give (s) 应该加单数第三人称；
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
Boblcw's composition 2015-06-14
What we need in overcoming difficulties is hard-working.
Sometimes there are many difficulties in our lives,but compared with giving up,overcoming them is my preference.
Difficulties in our lives will become more and more difficult,so we should work hard and get ready to overcome any difficulty.
Therefore,being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is hard-working.
Don't you agree with me?
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Mr.Li,I want to ask you a question.Should we make room at the beginning of any paragraph in an English composition?
Thanks!
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
你写的文章很顺，不错。
用到的万能句型也不错，但是，别忘了！结合自己亲身经历的话语要尽量多些，把万能句型结合亲身经历的记叙来写，这样既用上那个了万能句型，也符合文章的要求了，而不是万能句型和记叙的内容分离。李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is patience. 2015-06-14
What we need in overcoming difficulties is patience
Being a teenager studing in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is patience.Don’t you agree with me?
Comparing with bravery,I suppose patience is more important.Sometimes not that you have no bravery,but you don’t have enough patence.For example,when I am doing my homework,I think about the game what I want to play.Because of that,I lose my patience.And I can’t make the answer right.
In most cases,there is just a step between us and victory,and this step is patence.Therefore,it’s really important for us to overcome impatience,isn’t it?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
“Comparing with bravery,I suppose patience is more important.”
comparing后面应该改成patience和bravery，因为compare是及物动词
除非compared with后面可以直接放比较对象，否则需要接宾语，具体可以下载笔记参考课上讲过的内容。
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！