what we actually need in overcoming difficulties 2015-06-14
what we actually need inovercoming difficulties ?my answer is cofidence
for example,in our tests though our marks is one of the most important ruleof testing our ability,the temper when we do the test is important too.a student who isn't confident can't give a good answer of theirhardworking .because when they are facing problems what they first thought of is :"what should i do if i can,t got goodarks?"they always think things negative .however,the achievers thinks things opposite them ,that's the point they got success.
as a teenager live in modern society ,i have an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties. do you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
你能很好的写出自己想要表达的句子
虽然拼写有很多错误，但能看出来是你的家长帮你打字的，所以no worries!
用上了我们讲的万能句型。但是....
“As a teenager …..”这句话中的live应该改是living
“I have an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties”这句不是一个结论句子
应该在difficulties后面加上is confidence。
by the way~ 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
It is interesting to read newspaper英语作文 2015-06-14
It is interesting to read newspaper
Though internet is popular,we still read newspaper.In my idea it is interesting.
As we all know now most people enjoy reading newspapers in there spare time.
Reading newspapers is a part of oue daily life at present.
compared with reading magazines or other metenials reading newspaper is my preference.
You know why?
Because not only can we learn of the latest local news from newspapers but also we can see what will be happening in the future.
Reading newspaper can wider our horizon.
Therefore being a teenager studying in modern so citey.I hold an opinion that it is interening to read newspapers.
Don't you agree with me.
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
嘿嘿！
我觉得你写的就是我给的范文呀！
几乎没有太大的改动，
但是不管怎样，你要是能把范文背下来也是很好的！
中考现场一定能用的上的！
加油！
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
what we need in overcoming difficultes is confidence 2015-06-14
In our life,we will meet many difficulties.Everyone have himself opinion.
Compared with giving up,overcoming is my preference.What will we dao can overcoming difficulties?We need have lots of confidences.Not only can we overcoming difficulties,but also we can improve ourseives ability.
Therefore,being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that we need in overcoming difficulies is confidence.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
“What will we do can overcoming difficulties?”
这个句子有问题，改成：what will we do to overcome difficulties?
下面这个句子也是动词出了问题，情态动词应该接动词原形
“Not only can we overcoming difficulties,but also we can improve ourseives ability.”
所以overcoming应该改成overcome
“…,I hold an opinion that （what）we need in overcoming difficulies is confidence.
这个句子里缺少一个what，that是引导同位语从句，what是同位语从句中的need的宾语，如果你不懂语法可以不去管他，但是你知道what和that不能省略就行了！
别忘了！结合自己亲身经历的话语要尽量多些，把万能句型结合亲身经历的记叙来写，这样既用上那个了万能句型，也符合文章的要求了，而不是万能句型和记叙的内容分离。
by the way~ 李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is patience 涟漪 2015-06-14
What will you do if you are facing a problem? In my opinion,being patient is what we need.
Once a day, I was attending an important Maths exam.In the beginning,I was ahead of others.As time went by,some students finished their work, but I was still thinking over the last difficult question.I was so anxious that my hands were shaking all the time and my brain couldn't work as usual.After I realized my impatience,I berathed deeply for some times.I finally became patient again and passed the exam successfully.
Therefore being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that patience is what we need in overcoming difficulties. Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19分
和其他人的作文，你虽然用上我们讲的万能句型不多，但是用的恰到好处！
记住！一定要把讲过的万能句型巧妙用，如果不能都巧妙使用，就像你现在写的这样是非常可取的
最后！李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
what we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking liuyusheng 2015-06-14
it is said that nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that hardworking is the key to overcome difficulties.
There are many difficulties in my life,especially in my studies.I always have difficultyin learning history I failed to get good marks in some exams.At last,however,Isucceeded.
You know why?
Because I always believed that compared with give up,keeping hardworking is my preference.So my success is not accidental.
All of this ,not only can we widen our horizen,but also we can get success by keeping hardworking.Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
Because I always believed that compared with give up,keeping hardworking is my
下载笔记后好好看看，compared with B, A is my preference.
这个句型中，A,B都是名词，或者动名词。所以，你的give up应该改成giving up
最后一句“not only can we widen our horizen,but also we can get success by keeping hardworking”
似乎和之前的句子不是很搭，之前可以加一句：Through overcoming difficulties by myself之类的句子，能更好的衔接。
最后！李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage ------ 宇轩 2015-06-14
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage ------ 宇轩
"Courage is grace under pressure" That's what an American writer said to tell us the importance of courage.
As a school boy, I am often worried about my exam .last year I got a low mark in an important exam. I was quite sad. But I knew, only with courage, not only can I raise my spirits, but also I can covercome difficulties. Compared with being low for a long time, being full of courage is my preference, after that, I study harder than before, finally, I made it. Therefore, being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that what we need in covercoming difficulties is courage.
Courage helps us a lot, don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
不错呀！用上了很多我们讲过的万能句型！
发现了吗？你用上万能句型都是在议论，最好用万能句型和结合自己克服困难的亲身经历结合，
这样会更好~
最后！李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking 2015-06-14
Being a teenager studying in mordern society,I hold an opinion that we need hard-working in coming difficulties.Compare with patient，hardworking is my preference.When I was young,I often suffer from a lot of difficulties.However,I didn't give up,I was still hardworking.At last,I overcome the difficulties successfully.Not only can we overcome difficulties by hardworking,but we can learn a lot of things as well.Don't you agree with me？
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：17分
What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking
1-“Being a teenager studying in mordern society, I hold an opinion that we need hard-working in coming difficulties. ”这个万能句型用的不错，就是“modern”的拼写错了，这个是万能句型中的单词，不能出错，自己再好好背背。
2-Compare with patient hardworking is my preference.
这句话出来的有点突兀，你可以结合自己实际克服困难的经历来说
例如：
From my experience in overcoming difficulties, I think hardworking is more important.
3-Not only can we overcome difficulties by hardworking,but we can learn a lot of things as well.Don't you agree with me？
这句话中的人称是we，也不是很好的和之前的内容衔接，要改成I
另外，你要把我们讲的万能句型和你的句意结合起来，不要直接拿来使用，
要用完后反复读上下两句，看意思上连接是否紧密进行调整。
最后！李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
It's interesting to read newspapers 2015-06-14
Nowdays few and few people want to read newspapers.They always learn of things by phone and TV.It's bad situation.
Compared with watching TV reading newspapers is my preference. That's because it is interesting. Newspapers have a long history . before 100 years ago when it apperenced all people felt surprised. what is it？ why many many new things in it？ But with times went over we seldom read it . But not only can we learn of many interesting local news from it but also we can see what will happening in the future. So we must pace with the times. Being a teenager studying
in modern society I hold a opinion that it is interesting to read newspapers. Don't you agree with me？ 感谢李老师 辛苦 ?? 么么哒 我是一个boy
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：18分
1-It’s bad situation. situation具体化了之后可以视为可数名词，改为：a bad situation.
2-Compared with watching TV(,逗号别忘了）reading newspapers is my preference.
3-一共用了四句我们讲的万能句型，不错。
唯一的遗憾是结合实际的内容少，结合自己的真情实感这样的要求是当今中考的趋势
你可以试着把我们教的句子尽量用在真情实感的句子，例如：
“我在业余时间很喜欢读报纸
因为不仅...而且….”
这样的语境就既有真情实感又用上高级句型了。
最后！李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
作文（Millis）（6月13日）（卓越教育） 2015-06-13
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage
Each person has his own difficulties. In my idea, we need courage to overcome difficulties.
One of my friends was once a wonderful runner. Then an accident happened on him. His couldn't run any longer. However, he encouraged himself and raised his spirits. Now he takes up writing as a hobby, and his works are popular among his classmates. His courage worked.
Courage is a great element in our personalities. With the help of courage, not only can we raise our spirits, but also we can overcome difficulties easily. Being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-19)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19
1-Then an accident happened on him.
happened to sb发生在某人身上，
2-not only can we raise our spirits, but also we can overcome difficulties easily.
不错，用上了一个倒装句，也是我们上课讲的and的活用。
3-Being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
Don't you agree with me?
不错！两个万能句型连续使用不错。正好是记叙后的议论！
加油！祝中考取得好成绩！