What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence [Yosaki] 2015-06-20
Being teenagers study in modern society, we face many difficulties. So I hold an opinion than we need confidence.
Those difficulties are perhaps from our daily lives. Such as, communication, friendships, even exams. They like a large number of mountains. But we have to overcome. Before an exam, I was so nervous that I can’t keep still. Because not only I didn’t think I can pass it, but also my teacher and parents would be disappointed to me. At that time, my friend told me,” If you have confidence, you can do it!” Finally, I succeeded.
Confidence is a charming energy to help us overcome difficulties. Don’t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复Suxinyi ：
得分：17分
1-“Being teenagers study in modern society,”应该改为“Being a teenager studying in modern society”
1）-从自己的角度出发，所以是“a teenager”，2）这句话并不是个句子，所以study应改为studying
2-“Before an exam”这句话的插入有点突然，可以改成“I remember once there was an important exam”
3-“Because not only I didn’t think I can pass it, but also my teacher and parents would be disappointed to me. ” not only在使用时前半句需要倒装，可以改成“Because not only did I lack self-confidence…”注意：对某人失望是：be disappointed in sb. / be disappointed with sth.
另外，句子与句子间的逻辑关系有待加强！
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O(∩_∩)O~What we need in overcoming difficulties is a proper method 2015-06-19
Each person must have ever met difficulties.However,while some succeeded in overcoming them,others
failed.Why?It's due to whether they had a proper method.
Being a teenager studying in modern society,I sometimes get into difficulties in study.Once in an important exam,unfortunately,I wasn't able to pass it.Blamed by the teacher,I decided to study harder and always stayed up until midnight.In spite of hard work,my grades didn't increase at all.
My dear mother said‘A proper method is required to solve the problem.Not only must you set a good diet,but also you should get enough sleep.Certainly,you ought to keep studying hard as well.'
My mother's advice worked and I got more pleased grades soon.
Therefore，I hold an opinion that a proper method is what we really need in overcoming difficulties.
Aren't your opinion the same as mine?
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似乎字数超了...
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：19分
文章整体很流程，写的不错。万能句型的使用也很合理。但是还有两个地方需要注意：
1-“my grades didn't increase at all.” 学习成绩的提高用“improve”这个单词要好些
2-“ Aren't your opinion the same as mine?”这句话的主语是“your opinion”,是单数，应该用“isn’t”
下次再细心点，有机会拿满分～
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence (kyling) 2015-06-19
Overcoming difficulties are some of the most Important parts of our life journeys Thus, I deem that we need confidence to deal with these difficulties.
Is that true ? My answer is "yes" .Let me tell you the reason.Once I was busy preparing for an important exam.Not only did it make me feel nervous,but also broke the balance of my daily life.For this reason, I had to study all day and all night .Soon my teacher discovered my problem .she told me that my marks were good enough to do well in the exam and not to be worried "Just be confident "she said "and you will be successful"Ifollowed her suggestion ——be confident ,trust myself.As a result ,not only did I pass the exam,but also got a really good mark,I felt pleased with myself.
Therefore being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复kyling ：
得分：17分
1-Overcoming difficulties 作为整体，是单数，后面的be动词应该用“is”
2-“Overcoming difficulties are some of the most Important parts of our life journeys”这句话就可以改成：Overcoming difficulties is one of the most Important parts of our life journeys
3-be busy in doing sth. ,漏了“in”
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What we need in overcoming difficultie is patience 2015-06-19
Nothing is too difficult in the world if you set your mind into it, so I think what we need in overcoming difficulties is patience.
Although it was many years ago. I still remember. I failed to pass an exam, and I was so unhappy. My mother encouraged me to face difficulties patiently ,and I tried. Since then I have thought patience is really we need in overcoming difficulties.
From what has been discussed above. I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is patience.
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复郭维舞 ：
得分：16分
1-注意字数哦，差太多容易扣分，在讲述自身经历的地方可以再描写的具体一点
2-“Although it was many years ago. I still remember. I failed to pass an exam, and I was so unhappy. ”这个部分的结构可以升级一下：把“ I failed to pass an exam”和前面的“I still remember.”连上，改成remember的宾语从句：I still remember that I failed to pass an exam. 是不是更好呢？
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-19
Though confidence is important we still need courage . In my idea it is what we need in overcoming difficulties .
Compared with confidence or other things , courage is my preference .
You know why ?
When I was young I didn’t have courage so I couldn’t face difficulties . But a long time later I grow up , not only can I face but also solve all the difficulties what I overcoming .
Therefore being a teenager studying in a modern society , I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage .
Don’t you agree with me ?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复赵涵竹 ：
得分：16分
1-虽然用到了万能句型，但是发现了吗，第一段和第二段表达的意思重复了
万能句型固然好，但是也要用的恰到好处哦！
2-“But a long time later I grow up , not only can I face but also solve all the difficulties what I overcoming .” 这句话存在一些语法问题，可以这样修改：While during the course of growing up, not only can I face it but also I can solve most of the difficulties that I met.
3-虽然有自己的经历，但是比较笼统，下次可以尝试写的具体一些！
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking,by cjn 2015-06-19
What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking
Life can bring us many surprises, disappointments and difficulties. It is important for us to learn how to overcome difficulties. Because it helps us achieve more at home, in school or in life.
I have an unforgettable experience to share with you .When I was thirteen, I had to pass an important exam .But I did not prepare well for it. So I felt nervous and sad at that time .But one day I encouraged myself and started to study hard .With my hardworking. I soon found out some good ways to solve the problem easily .And then many difficulties were overcome by me.
So I passed the exam without difficulty.
Now days, it is common to meet difficulties. Many people like to give it up, but being a teenager in modern society ,I hold an opinion that we need hardworking in overcome difficulties .
Don’t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复cjn：
得分：19分
作文整体流畅自然，有几个小问题需要注意哦！
1-文章开头可以直入主题，所以surprises and disappointments可以不写，写了反而破坏整体性
2-注意“nowadays”的拼写，也可能是家长打字打错了，don’t worry
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 2015-06-19
What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence
To our teenagers , there are many difficulties and there are many behaviors ,when we face difficulties . In my opinion, we must be confident when we face difficulties.
I think, if we don’t be confident ,we don’t do anything. Not only can we think of the solutions of difficulties, but also we can have good spirits. If we have a good spirits, on one hand, we can be happy, on the other hand ,they can help us solve the difficulties more quickly.
Therefore, being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
Don’t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复R.O.O.M：
得分：16分
文章的逻辑稍微出现了点偏差，比如下面这两个句子：
“I think, if we don’t be confident ,we don’t do anything. Not only can we think of the solutions of difficulties, but also we can have good spirits. ”语义上不连贯，在词的用法上也存在问题
可以改为：I think if we aren’t confident, we can do nothing. On the contrary，if we are confident, not only…
另外，虽然有议论，也用到了万能句型，但是欠缺记叙，就是描述自身经历的段落，这点也同样重要哦！
anyway，李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-19
[Author: Victoria]
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage
There are different opinions among people about the essential
spirits in overcoming difficulties.In my view,courage is the most important.
At the end of February ,I entered for an English speaking
competition. Compared with thinking over before taking action,making everything done rapidly is my perference. Briefly, I made up my mind impulsively,Then the competition unexpectedly became a big problem because I had never taken part in a similar event before.
However, after learning about my worry ,my parents just smiled and said “Gofor it!you can make it!” They gave me much support. Therefore,not only did I thank them from the bottom of my heart but also I got enough courage.Finally I did so well that I won the first prize.How excited I was!
Being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold and opinion that courage it the most significant in overcoming difficulties.
Don’t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复Victoria：
得分：19分
从文章可以看出来，英语应该还不错吧？哈哈！整篇作文很通顺，不错！
也能够把万能句型和这篇文章中的具体内容结合起来，夹叙夹议，非常不错哦！
继续加油努力！
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
by the way~当心字数的限制！
朱千一作业 2015-06-19
what we need in overcoming difficulties is Difficulties can't be avoided in our daily lives patiens in what we need.
Comepared with giving up ,being patiens is my prefernce.Im am hhforgettable exam .An difficult question beat me.As first .I was too nervous to get it.
After becoming patient,Everything become simple,Not only can I get the answer,but also I can do it rapidly. Then I passed the exam without diffculty,
Beying a teehager living in the life with uncountable diffculties,I hold apinion that patience is what we need in overcoming diffculties.
Don't you agree with me.
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复朱千一：
得分：18分
1-注意“耐心”的拼写，正确的应为：patience n. patient adj.
2-“patiens in what we need.”这句话中的“in”应改为“is”
3-Everything后面用单数形式,改成“Everything becomes…”
虽然万能句型只用了三句，但是都用的恰到好处，作文也结合了亲身经历，比较丰富，多数拼写错误应该是因为家长打字的问题。整体不错
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is belief 2015-06-18
Being a teenager studing in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is belief.
To me,there is a belief to catch up with my own dream"Nothing is impossible."--just what NIKE says.
Comparing giving up on the studying roads,fighting against difficulties with belief is my preference.My belief comes to my mind in accident.It always gives me enough courage and bravely.
Along with the development of times,more and more difficulties come to our lives.So as my point of view,we need belief to overcome difficulties.
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复W.W.J ：
得分：16分
1-“Comparing giving up on the studying roads,fighting against difficulties with belief is my preference.”这句话应该改成：Compared with giving up on the way of learning, fighting against difficulties with belief is my preference.可以到网站上下载笔记来看看compared with A, B…的结构，加深印象
2-“My belief comes to my mind in accident.”这句话放在作文中有点突兀，记住作文的连贯性很重要
3-“It always gives me enough courage and bravely.” 这句话中的bravely是一个形容词，用and连接的部分词性要相同，所以“bravely”的地方需要改成一个适当的名词
4-“So as mypoint of view,we need belief to overcome difficulties.”这句话中，as后接名词，as的词性应为介词，理解为“作为”，和so连接时，语境上翻译不通顺，可以改用一个表语从句：So my point of view is that we need belief to overcome difficulties.
文章缺少议论，这样显得作文比较空洞，在实际考试时，如果是记叙文，要注意结合实际经历使作文“鲜活”起来
whatever!
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking.------WHH 2015-06-18
Being a teenager studying in modern society ,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking .
Last month,I was facing a periodic testing.Although I was a bit of nervous,I could still pay attention to doing some reviews.On the day after the periodic testing,I could hardly learn anything by heart.All I thought was how well I had done in the testing.To my surprise,I failed the test.Not only was the success important,but also the failure was important as well.After that I know the importance of hardworking.And compared with building castles in the air,working hard is my preference. I think it's the most important method to study.Don't you agree with me?
Now I am working hard for the next testing!
回复内容：(2015-06-20)
李霄鹏老师回复Zheng ying：
得分：18分
1-I was facing a periodic testing.这句话的时态可以改成一般过去时，改成：I had a…last month.
2-important的使用过多，可以改成同义词“significant”“vital”等
整篇文章比较通畅，万能句型的使用也能为文章加分
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is belief 2015-06-18
What we need in overcoming difficulties is belief
Everyone has to face difficulties in life. So, being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is belief.
My life flashes before my eyes, one day, I failed in an important exam. Compared with playing video games reading books is my preference. So, I hardly ever failed in important exams, and that exam was really a big trouble for me. However, as the proverb says,” where there is a will, there is a way”, I kept my belief to success. I put my heart into studying and a few weeks later, not only could I do well in exams but also I could help my friends with their studies in my free time. I did it!
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that what we need overcoming difficulties is belief.
回复内容：(2015-06-20)
李霄鹏老师回复于济铭：
得分：19分
作文写的很顺畅，万能句型的使用也比较贴切，也结合了实际，整体思路连贯
有几个地方需要注意：
1-Compared with playing video games reading books is my preference. 这个句型在A，也就是playing video games的位置后面需要加一个“逗号”
2-what we need overcoming difficulties is belief 在need后面加一个in
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作业 2015-06-18
Freya.C
What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
In our daily lives,there are many difficulties,but what we can do to overcome difficulties?In my idea,it's confidence.
Compared with patience,confidence is the most important.
You know why?
Not only can we be encouraged by confidence,but also we can raise our spirits.Besides,we can improve our bravery by confidence.
Being a teenager studying in mordern society,I hold an oponion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
回复内容：(2015-06-20)
李霄鹏老师回复陈佳琪：
得分：17分
1- In our daily lives 改成： In our daily life
2- Compared with patience,confidence is the most important. 两者之间的比较用more，三者或以上的比较用most，或者你也可以用我们推荐的词－preference,可以下载我们的讲座笔记再好好看看
用到了不少万能句型，但是缺少点自己的发挥～
不能只有议论，还要有记叙呀！
最后，注意modern和opinion的拼写，这是万能句型里的，要格外关注！
whatever!
李老师祝你中考取得好成绩！
（CY的作业哈哈）What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking 2015-06-18
What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking
There are so many difficulties in our daily life that we have to overcome. But what do we need?
Being a teenager studying in modern society. I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking.
You know why?
Because in general it’s impossible to overcome difficulties easily. Although there are some people called “tallents” who can solve these problems quikly and easily, compared with “talents”,being hardworking is my preference.Because during the stages not only can we understand the life deeply but also we can get more happiness. It`s more wonderful.
Therefore ,I deem if somebody wants to overcome difficulties, the most important thing he or she needs is hardworking.
Don’t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-20)
李霄鹏老师回复姜红：
得分：17分
作文写的很顺，万能句型应用的也比较多，从整篇文章能看出来语法功底不错
但是如果把我们所给的万能句型和作文内容结合起来，那就更好，更贴近主题了！
另外文章缺少记叙，记住，叙述和议论同样重要，多写点自身经历能使文章更生动！
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is patience 2015-06-18
Now,we have to do something hurrily because of different stress. so we need in overcoming diffialties is patience.
I had an important exam yesterday.I was nervous at first.Then I read every sentences in papers carefully, especially the words that teachers said again and again.In a word,I thought I could pass the exam.
In my idea patience is useful.Not only can I pass the exam but also I can gain a good habbit.
Being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that we need in covercoming difficulties is patience.
Do not you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-20)
李霄鹏老师回复刘瑶：
得分：18分
1-“so we need in overcoming diffialties is patience.” 这个句子和“I hold an opinion that we need in covercoming difficulties is patience.”的问题一样，两个句子都是we前面少了一个need的宾语what。应该是“what we need in overcoming difficulties is
patience.”
2-“I thought could pass the exam”漏了一个主语“I”
应该改成“I thought that I could pass the exam”，这个应该是家长打的时候遗漏了
3-最后，“Do not you agree with me?”改成“Don’t you…me?”
作文结合了自身的经验，有记叙也有议论，还用到了三句万能句型，这点不错！
但是注意前后句子间的紧密联系。
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